A Corner Of Life Comments

Real love wants to protect the nexus But how can avoid the challenging truth Dreams are perhaps the projection of next A way to fantasy….. Lovely write.10/10

the last line was just beautiful. a nicely crafted poem of different aspects of life. well written.

yes fear of loss is the greatest fear even in sub-conscious mind........an aspect of life well portrayed in well crafted lines...................very nice

one cannot move narrow stares of mind....... silence that cannot last but burst.....very attractive lines and felt it a beautiful poem.The richness of life events.

fear of loss is the greatest fear even in dreams.................

Beautiful poem Salini. You have presented it very beautifully. Loved the lines... But hidden truth its nightmare....Very true said Anxiety is a corner of life and its really very difficult to pass through it. Its a challenging truth, and very true said Dreams are perhaps the projection of next... In fact I loved reading each lines.

thanks for the comment

''Dreams are perhaps the projection of next A way to fantasy….. '' beautiful line