A Coral Beach In Connemara Comments

This is excellent Sean. Long lines all the way through so beautifully descriptive then a very simple short last line to close the poem. I like it alot P.s How do I get a Faidh into my name? Seamus

Sean you have done really well in this poem.. beautiful..

lovely, never stop writing poetry.

Sean, I really appreciate the line about coral under your feet: 'For its prickle could kill tender bare feet. ' I'm from Ft. Lauderdale, FL and have experienced that feeling many times! Your poem made me feel like I lived the moment right along with you! Good work. Amanda

Sean, I think this is a fine evocative moment you have captured-nice to see a few structural considerations in a poem!

dear sean, thanks for commenting on my poem. i went to an irish governed school in sarawak, borneo years back. perhaps, some irishness has distilled into me. Your golden hair blew gently in the passing sea breeze, - i love this line. honour your irishness.

Sean, I think your muse lives in Connemara. This is a lovely, haunting poem. Raynette