A Coquettish Smile Comments

'When she smiles Coquettishly' Rachel Ann Butler

Amire you took all the words and i'm running out of saying nice nice nice i like hidden feeling

Nice! Keep doing ur gud work!

This made my heart race.

Nightingale, You hearts shines with boundless kindness and love, fine poems....10... Tsira

This reminds me of the say where a door shuts God opens a window. Thank you for bringing back the hope.

I like your style of writing and I loved the ray of hope you left us with. Thanks for sharing!

Amazing verses indeed........10+

A beautiful, inspiring poem from the heart! Fx

chariots of angels coming to your site, along with the one, you loved so much.........and you live happily ever after.spark the air with your love, my friend.

a nice love poem. well done.

Stunning! So beautiful, hun! I'm back, my nightingale! ((hugs))

An elegant read here, with the message of hope, that will remove this gloom! *10*! best regards Friend Thad

A self expressive and very well composed poem. Correct me if I understood wrongly I would say: She is sweet, She is all smiles; Her innocent smile Can take you miles. After darkness, There is sun shine; Your courtyard flower Gives you new love line. Peels of her laughter Fill you with joy, You can play safe With the divine toy. In her you realize The fulfillment of life, She brings you out of The life’s all strife. You call it bliss, Or call it boom; It silently enters Into your room. God bless her.

You found light at the end of the tunnel, a well-penned optimistic poem Nightingale, 10 Lynda xx

Persian you are a nightingale.. you find real love after all disasters.. fine one..10 Rema

There are always rays of hope within the darkest moments of our life... A confident will to go on and dispel shadows of unhappiness through lovely words and unusual length of the poem. A very good write! 10

New love after a gloomy days...Great touch of words! ! ! love it...