Saturday, March 10, 2018

A Cool Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

In their short laps
Birds hop from flower
To flower
Bathing in the fresh
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Indira Renganathan 10 October 2018

Another good descriptive poem like your Beautiful Morning.....nice observation nicely crafted...interesting poem ..10++++...thanks a lot for your comment on my poem friend

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Rajnish Manga 11 March 2018

The pursuit of birds and bees in the morning hour- Nicely captured through this lovely poem. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 March 2018

Just a small effort to jot down my thoughts Sir. Thanks for inspiration.

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