Tuesday, September 30, 2008

'A Cool Breeze' Comments

Rating: 5.0

A cool breeze of air blew in tonight
got the extra blankets out for my bed.
Lit the furnace pilot light
I'm feeling a fuzziness in my eyes and head.
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Linda Winchell
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Barbara Terry 01 October 2008

I agree girlfriend that this is smiple yet subtle. The story of autumn's preparation for winter is a lot putting a child to bed. First he/she must have a bath, then put on their pajamas/nightgown and go to sleep, preparing to get up in the morning. Thiis a very good poem with vivid images that tells the story of winter's march. Take care girlfriend and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008

simple yet subtle... :)

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