Tuesday, July 19, 2011

A Convicts Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

were all locked up for messing up
were all the same
we share the same pain
we wear orange, they wear
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Congratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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Craig Anderson 19 July 2011

Exotic. Listen you commit the crime bla blah you know how the rest goes. But you haven't got to lower your standard. YOUR STANDARD get yourself clued up to what you want to achieve when you come out. Don't look around you now, think what your going to look like when you come out. But don't dropp your standards. Yes sir No Sir costs nothing..it's called manners. As long as it's a two way street and you get it back like for like. People will treat you different, in there trust me get your plan worked out what your going to do when you leave there. People will be saying Hmm Exotic he changed there's something about him, they'll be wanna like you trust me. lol I told you I'd dog you. Peace and Best Regards Craig.

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