A Convict Branded Comments

Superb Sylvia, knew I'd get round to reading it in the end. Very descriptive and true. Lisa

Rose, you have a certain knack for taking a bit of history, something so broad that it blows the mind, and you bring it down into something so personal, just one person, and show how he survived ro keep going. Beautifully done, my little history teacher! !

Seems like such a high price to pay, This is so well written, Thankyou Sis..Love duncan X

Out of this darkness came Australia. A fine take on crime and punishment in the era, but echoes to today, where the pendulum has swung the other way, and law allows criminals to get away with murder and often the innocents are punished by default. A few minor edits (spells) required, did not in ayway detract from the flow and power of the poem. Patrick xx

Sylvia, an awesome write. Your talented word painting brings the plight of these unfortunate souls to life. I am very touched. Love from your sister and friend, Sandra

Outstanding poem on the very unusual topic of exile! Brilliant!

sylvia...the boat people and many like them...i hope they find peace...love...nalini