A Conversation With You Comments

I have already commented on this, but reading it again, I have to comment again. There is really alot of honor realized here. I love the devotion and recognition you display and give. Very touching with added grace. Good work. Debbie

dear nikunj, it is a beautiful prayer from your heart to the almighty.i have a similar poem called, 'a conversation with god'.sometimes god answers! my best wishes to you. ritty

You have describe this poem very well. Meaningful images are shown well too Great stuff. Enjoyed reading it

Wow! ! You said everything in one go..breath taking! 19th August.09 Rehana Nazli

Well done Nikunj. You have included meaningful images throughout your thoughtful poem. The last stanza worked beautifully to 'undress' who you was! 10 Karin Anderson

Beautiful words that flow so well down the page...easy on the eyes and ears when read out loud as well. Just replace the abbreviated 'u' and 'ur' out of the first stanza (unless it's there for a reason) and it will be perfect. Thanks, roshni.

Neat. A moving target, huh? ? Cheers. Subroto

Pretty powerful stuff.... Somebody has pull! :) DC

I like this poem of yours 10++++. Very nice and hope I am loved the way you describe. Please read my poem and do some advise for me as a new poet. Thanks much

Simply woaw, its really feel like you are talking to ur soul mate. for those who dont believe in soul mate, will even believe in love reading this

a nice one of course..well done..grace

you are the ink that flows in my pen- lovely poem, a great converseation 10 Mamta

woww that YOU YOU YOU is all great connection and conversation -10 anjali

a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya

a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya

what a lovely work bending down you want every thing........ bright idea and best write............. see my 10 +