Sunday, October 16, 2011

A Conversation With My Life... Comments

Rating: 4.8

He asks me what you have stored for me ……….My LIFE

Oh, how innocent question he poses..
What have you stored for me my Life? ? ? ?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 19 February 2022

Masterclass poetry.

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Gino Valentine 22 July 2020

Such a fantastic conversation though hypocritical.

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Michael Jack 14 July 2020

This is one of the best poem I have read so far Today.10+

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bri edwards 13 February 2019

Ah! " allegory" maybe that is why i don't understand you. i'm not fond of nor 'good' at 'reading' symbolism. is/are the " he" and the " I" one person? ? ? are/is he/I having a talk with itself? ? Yes, i try to not let Death know my secrets! at least not without me first receiving something from Death. bri ("

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2019

You are right Bri, When the idea is born in another language which is mostly your mother tongue and you try to put it exactly in some other language then such things happens.

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Michael Jack 14 July 2020

Well bri, that is your problem and you need to work on it.

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Austin DeSouza 08 January 2019

Marvellous piece of writing.

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Deepak S S 27 December 2018

Nothing can be better than this conversation. A Masterpiece.

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Barbara Sutherland 07 November 2018

Excellent poem. Philosophy in this poem is fantastic.

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 November 2015

Fantastic poem on life and death.

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T Rajan Evol 05 October 2015

Philosophical touch in this poem..............Class act, Asim.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 September 2015

A great philosophic poem by Asim Nehal. He seems to me an all rounder.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

My life! ! ! ! But, there is hope; so i will always move on. Nice work.

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