Saturday, September 3, 2016

A Conversation - On Reaching Top Comments

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From the hilltop as i was sliding
A voice called me and said; Why don't you stay?
I am alone here, people come and go nobody stays.
You must give me company, now since you have come so far
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 06 September 2016

Philosophical poem MAN....You have great nick to write such poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

A voice chased me down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 03 September 2016

So you talk with wise voice, thats cool Asim :) From nothing it is a point to grow and construct everything.... :) but feeling nothing make us feel like having more spaces inside to grow....thats why knowledge people always think they are lack of knowledge....feel moderate is...I think it is a good conversation you have there..blink blink ;)

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Yes Unwritten Soul, When a vessel is full it falls to ground and when vessel is empty it sounds much...Thank u so much for your intelligent comments, I really appreciate it. Stay blessed my Friend.

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