A Conversation Between - A Bird And The Pond Comments

Brilliant poem. I agree with many comments here.

Such a brilliant conversation, I wish they really engage in such creative conversation.

To my list..

Excellent poem. Crafty and innovative.

Awesome conversation. Great metaphor used.

You seem to very good in writing conversations. Keep it up. +

Each other and feel from our own viewpoint. Our limitations gets reflected in our convers well done

We all look for some support in our lives and the conversation made me think about how we look at

Amazing conversation nicely written. Your poems are intriguing. 10

What a beautiful message! Each one has an assigned duty! It is when we fulfill the mission of our life that we find happiness! The pond is happy allowing others to have a dip in its cool waters! We feel joy when do something that will add to others joy. Enjoyed the lovely poem! A sure 10

WOW IF I WAS THE POND I'D SAY O BIRDIE DEARY JUST THINK OF ME NOT WEARY BUT OF THYSELF WHEN YO EITHER DON'T FIND ME OR FIND ME DRY WHO WILL GIVE A SIP TO YOUR LIPS IF I NOT EVER A POND BE HOW WOULD WOMEN BEAR KIDS IN THEIR WOMBS IF THEY THIRST FOR ME O BIRDIE YOU HAVE ONLY A BIRDS MIND YOU THINK OF SELF ONLY COME AGAIN AND GAIN MERGE WITHIN ME....HAVE A LONG BATH DAILY WILL ENJOY WITH ME YE

This poem is going straight to my list!