Sunday, June 9, 2013

A (Conventional) Love Song! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2018

Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths, Like two streams that flow and merge as one And travel miles to run down to the sea, Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! .....nice poetic expression. This is really A beautiful poem on love having fantastic expression. Enjoyed.10

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Kee Thampi 05 July 2018

Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards really monsoon reflections

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Indira Renganathan 04 July 2018

Lovely love and lovely words..title is lovely..lovely poem with a lovely ending..last four lines are beautiful...no doubt you are the poetry Queen! ! ..thank you...thanks for all your comments on my poems and support to me too Valsa

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Jafeth 04 January 2018

Romantic

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

To ease my pain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chris Zachariou 08 August 2014

A touching poem about the feelings stirred by true love. Wonderfully written and expressed.

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Amitava Sur 03 June 2014

A amazing write up specially plunging into eternity with the immortal love.... I was just floating with your flow of words.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 May 2014

Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! Love is God and God is love, the poem is a sweet lovely song for him.

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Truly beautiful and nice poem to recite and also to understand the meanings a little difficult it felt.Ambrosia what I don't know.

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Paul Sebastian 17 April 2014

Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write.

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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

what a romantic song dear, .....it would be a hit if it is fused with rhythm and music.......great..

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 March 2014

An eternal love song composed very delicately.........Valsa..........

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Beautiful romantic poem.. Loved reading it twice. And the last stanza so beautifully completed...

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

Sing a beautiful love song.

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Sekharan Pookkat 18 June 2013

Sing and sing the song of love And fill the hearts of all

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 June 2013

Oh! What a lovely romantic love song! If only all pairs were like this oozing with love there wouldn't be any divorce in the world. Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever is a brilliant finishing line, Valsa! KUDOS!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 June 2013

What a romantic poem, Valsa! Oh! what a thrill to read your wonderful poem oozing with love! If only every pair in the world is such there won't be any divorces as the pair plunges into eternity to be in love ever and ever! AN AWESOME WRITE!

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2013

So romantic it is.Lovable.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 June 2013

Let us plunge into eternity to be in love - nice poem expressing love's beautiful steps.

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Payal Parande 12 June 2013

Love begins at home, and it is not how much we do... but how much love we put in that action. Mother Teresa oh ma'am! i am in love with this piece...bravo indeed

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