Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?
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Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards really monsoon reflections
Lovely love and lovely words..title is lovely..lovely poem with a lovely ending..last four lines are beautiful...no doubt you are the poetry Queen! ! ..thank you...thanks for all your comments on my poems and support to me too Valsa
To ease my pain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A touching poem about the feelings stirred by true love. Wonderfully written and expressed.
A amazing write up specially plunging into eternity with the immortal love.... I was just floating with your flow of words.
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! Love is God and God is love, the poem is a sweet lovely song for him.
Truly beautiful and nice poem to recite and also to understand the meanings a little difficult it felt.Ambrosia what I don't know.
Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write.
what a romantic song dear, .....it would be a hit if it is fused with rhythm and music.......great..
An eternal love song composed very delicately.........Valsa..........
Beautiful romantic poem.. Loved reading it twice. And the last stanza so beautifully completed...
Oh! What a lovely romantic love song! If only all pairs were like this oozing with love there wouldn't be any divorce in the world. Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever is a brilliant finishing line, Valsa! KUDOS!
What a romantic poem, Valsa! Oh! what a thrill to read your wonderful poem oozing with love! If only every pair in the world is such there won't be any divorces as the pair plunges into eternity to be in love ever and ever! AN AWESOME WRITE!
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love - nice poem expressing love's beautiful steps.
Love begins at home, and it is not how much we do... but how much love we put in that action. Mother Teresa oh ma'am! i am in love with this piece...bravo indeed
Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths, Like two streams that flow and merge as one And travel miles to run down to the sea, Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever! .....nice poetic expression. This is really A beautiful poem on love having fantastic expression. Enjoyed.10