Friday, December 25, 2015

A Contrast Comments

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Look how the sun rises and sets,
Earth becomes heaven where man lives;
It is man who gets and forgets;
It is God who gives and forgives.
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Sayeed Abubakar
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Asma Zenjali 31 December 2015

Beautiful as usual i like it really! It is man who gets and forgets; It is man who takes and dies It is man who has made law and has destroyed everyone's peace. Amazing verses peace be upon you sir!

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Sayeed Abubakar 31 December 2015

Thanks, Asma. I like your comment.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 28 December 2015

I like it so much, Thank you for sharing this great poem for God's gifts.

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Sayeed Abubakar 28 December 2015

Thanks, dear poet Abderrahmane Dakir

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Alisha Castle 27 December 2015

Yes, I agree with you. Only He cares about giving without taking. He takes care of everyone from everywhere....Have peace to you and your family and have a happy new year.....

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Sayeed Abubakar 28 December 2015

Happy New Year, Alisha. Thanks for your comment.

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Hazel Durham 27 December 2015

God gave us a universe that could be heaven but for man and his greed which is a compulsion of unnecessary need for more, he destroys himself and anybody that is close to him in a spiral of destruction of his heart and soul. God is there for him always to enrich his life with the beauty of love and kindness! Superb write Sayeed and thanks for sharing!

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Sayeed Abubakar 28 December 2015

Your comment is always rich. Thanks, dear Hazel. Stay happy.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 25 December 2015

A beautiful poem on universe in relation to Allah.truly a magnificent write.10+ rate

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Sayeed Abubakar 26 December 2015

Excellent comment. Thank you very much, dear poet.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2015

A nice poem. Appreciate your analysis of God's gift to human kind and how the latter flaws in interfering with His laws.

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Sayeed Abubakar 25 December 2015

Thanks, dear poet. Your commentary on my poem is praiseworthy.

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Kassem Oude 25 December 2015

Good verses either in form or core. What differs if the Almighty God moves the universe by His own hand or orders nature to do for Him! ?

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Sayeed Abubakar 25 December 2015

Mysterious, dear poet. Thanks.

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Areeb Majeed 25 December 2015

That's beautiful, Mr. Sayeed.

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Sayeed Abubakar 25 December 2015

Thanks, dear poet. Stay happy.

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