Saturday, November 7, 2009

A Contented Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bed of grass beneath you and i
a blanket of stars over us in the nights sky
as we turn toward each other
staring eye to eye
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

when i finished this poem, i too let out a contented sigh..not from boredom, i might add, but from the experience from your story..thank you so much..i emailed this to a frend, and now she's an avid reader...i hope your dreams come true and you get to write greeting cards, for us buyers need this type of freshness..also added this poem to my fav's list..and please if you have any friends with this true talent please send me they're names

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Krista'lyntinia Lancelaotti 27 November 2009

it was like reliving an experience over and over..gorgeous 10s

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

romatic and a beautiful poem heartfelt top marks

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Kristina B'williams 10 November 2009

VERY INTIMATE PORTRAIT...LEFT ME WITH A CONTENTED SIGH..10S

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very warm images you painted..touching poem..

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Caitlin Walczyk 07 November 2009

Very good poem. I could feel your emotion just pouring out. Well done!

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