Saturday, April 24, 2010

A Contented Mother Comments

Rating: 3.9

It seems for so many years
I've lived my life for someone else
I put my feelings and needs
Away somewhere on a shelf
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Ray Hansell
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Chinedu Dike 12 September 2020

Very heartfelt with strong emotions. 'As Soft As A Mum's Love' Powerfully and movingly penned.

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Susan Williams 03 June 2016

Beautiful. Parents should all set this kind of parenting as their goal. Very smooth and easy to read, the rhyming pattern fit the style and message. Well done all the way around.

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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2016

The words come out of the heart of a mother who has put in every bit of herself to bring up her children to be responsible citizen of society. She doesn't care if she will beget love. Thanks. Taking care of them Was like a full time job ......true love never found it's way to me

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 June 2016

Heartiest Congratulations on the poem of the day as also for composing such a nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Lyn Paul 02 June 2016

A perfect poem chosen. For every mother there is some connection here in your words. Thank you and I hope you have found someone special.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 02 June 2016

a contented mother who is passionate about her children. she deserves the best, true love

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

Taking care of them! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2016

Great thoughts of a great mother nicely expressed in a great poem.

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