Saturday, October 21, 2017

A Conquer Fear Comments

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The expression of fear is among my heart,
So deep and tormented by your lungs.
So sympathy I feel, demoralized, and outsmart
By such of your judgment and outwit tongues.
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Chinedu Dike 04 November 2017

Fear is a conglomeration of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, it's only a magnified reflection of something small - that's why on confronting fear, one usually finds it inconsequential. An insightful motivational poem nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Brian.

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Brian Varino 04 November 2017

Thanks, I love your positive criticism with great word choices. Thank you very much, Chinedu Dike.

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