Wednesday, June 5, 2013

A Connecting Outlook Comments

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An Individual Outlook

I am an individual
A living, breathing cluster of flesh and bone
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Savita Tyagi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 May 2020

You have made an insightful inscription on Individual Outlook and Universal Outlook. In Individual outlook one works only for his own self but in Universal outlook he depends on others for his survival. Besides there are so many poiints in both outlooks which are vividly and startlingly delineated by you. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 21 July 2014

There is a middle ground, a middle out look Just as valid as a dusk or dawn A small connecting point For you and I. That's a great idea in a well thought and well wrote poem.

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Valsa George 05 July 2013

So true Savita! Between the individual outlook and the universal outlook, there lies a golden mean- When we wipe another's tear, when we try to alleviate the pain of a grieving heart, we derive a sense of satisfaction and thereby opening the gate of happiness for us, in a way fulfilling our own personal desire for being happy! Thus through universal outlook, we evolve a personal outlook too! A beautiful philosophy expressed powerfully! !

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