A Conjugal Breakfast Comments

A conjugal love may lack the thrills of romance, May be the superficial romance is gone, but love has deepened over the years. Congrats for this good humored poem.

Beautiful lines about conjugal life...Very impressive. Daddy is starring at the back of Mom, below the table lovely pet dear Tom, what the he is doing is it painting or writing, whatever it may be, it must be exciting.

Revisiting this poem once more we feel glad. This is definitely a magnificent poem. A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10

In addition thereto, this poem also centers on the essence of poetry and the passion a poet has on his poetry works. I like the last line, it conveys the eternality of a poem. A beautifully crafted write.10 and onto my Poem List. Congratulations Akhtar. You truly deserved this accolade.

STUPENDOUS write that focuses on family and aims to strengthen the bond among family members. Breakfast is the meal that gets the day started and it is the time when family gathers and plans for the day. A happy and beautiful family has been painted on the canvas of this wonderful poem.

You are the best at this form of poetry on this site. Congratulations, my friend.

A conjugal love may lack the thrills of romance. Nicely written and well communicated. SYLVA-ONYEMA

She takes it and keeps it in valley of be hives! And lo and behold it survives.....that is the power of love. Congratulations for member poem place for a wonderful poem. It is a pleasure to read a poem from master of craft.

Well presented about the conjugal love..., the love and affection persist no matter how old you grow, congratulations for being selected as Poem of the day

A child may not understand how father and mother complement each other. Beautifully crafted poem.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.Many of your poems deserve to be on the first page of Poem Hunter.

Life starts well with a partner (wife) to love each other, wonderful poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

Beautifully depicted the conjugal love.... Congrats for being selected as the poem of the day. With best wishes.

Conjugal love may lack the thrills of romance Yet it has a picture of its own charms. Pictures painted in art speaks more at the breakfast, With beautiful concluding lines That rhymes with the music and dance. Beautiful and humorous poem. Loved reading it. Congratulations on member POD!

Akhtar Saheb, congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the day.

Very well scripted.....Akhtarji.........cong. for being selected as the P.O.D....deserving one.......10++++++

a wonderful descriptive poem of family life with it's highs and lows? ..............well penned Akhtar

It is great to see you here where you deserve. Thank you sir for your interesting poem.

Such a beautiful poem! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as POD!

A pretty picture of conjugal life painted with a humorous touch. Very lovely to read. Great pick of the day. Congrats sir Akhtar.

In the valley of bee hive! ! Muse! Fuse! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.