Monday, January 18, 2010

A Confused Petal Comments

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A sweet child is standing outdoor, playing dancing singing a song.
The alone child is finding a friend, someone she could talk to, and hold her hand.

Her laughter as sweet as strawberry, she sits on her wall, wondering a wonder.
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Allemagne Roßmann 11 February 2010

Everything is perfect the violins are playing, her heartbeat is thumping she is feeling a second of madness. Then why was she crying sobbing panting confusing? ? ? ? When she is charming, caring, socializing and loving? ? ? ? Tudo bem....Good write

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Afzal Shauq 25 January 2010

well done dear peot...i like the way you express your sweet ideas like you did here with very awesome way..loved it 10/10

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