Sunday, February 21, 2010

A Confession To You Comments

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''wash away the thoughts in me. keeps my mind away from you. no more pride, no more tears....sorry are all I have to do…weep are born but always hide....tears for me, it will not dry....magnify the solitude within...when will it fades and totally die? ''

in the silence of the night
memories played my brain
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Love so strong that it causes the sky to unite with the sea. Wow! Well done my freind.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 February 2010

Indeed very good write feeling refreshment …doused ‘…I am captured and felt my self surrender…’ This line I mu mu mu [enjoy] muchhhh 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 February 2010

Indeed very good write feeling refreshment …doused ‘…I am captured and felt my self surrender…’ This line I mu mu mu [enjoy] muchhhh 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Monica Sevilla 25 February 2010

wonderful poem...it inspires me more..10

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Akram Awadat 23 February 2010

good poem, excllent express

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Eyan Desir 22 February 2010

fine poetic lines tender emotions of the heart well express on the screen...

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Eyan Desir 22 February 2010

Fine poetic lines very well express ten........

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 February 2010

'no strong winds can calm my dreams on how i wish to see your smiles hope one day, sky will fall into the sea so i could see how stars kiss the waves and rest quietly the whole night... ' What a beautiful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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C. P. Sharma 22 February 2010

Your confession is the perfect dedication. Break, Break, Break All my thoughts O sea, So that my thoughts Ever fall upon Thee, So that in bliss I ever remain And Name becomes My sole refrain. CP

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