Saturday, December 3, 2005

A Confession Of A Frustrated Swimmer Comments

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I can never be as graceful as a dolphin.

No, I can never ever be.
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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
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Joseph Daly 03 December 2005

Lovely one Marie. The use of the swimmer as a metaphor is great and a unique way of illustrating the point. Would you look at the 7th line again, I'm not sure that it makes sense. Should it be: ' Why can I not swim...? ' Regards, Denis Joe

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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

October 12,1984
Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
October 12,1984
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