Friday, October 24, 2008

A Confession Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always had a feeling
that I gave you my entire life
'I' worked hard,
'I' suffered,
...
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Lee Howlett 15 July 2009

I agree a great confessions

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 April 2009

what a great confession in a very lovely way.? written with feeling...emotions are poured out... i admire you for this write...very meaningful your thoughts serve as guide for us. really great... i enjoyed and was touched reading this poem of yours.. 10++++..

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Ridge Cahill 06 February 2009

Dripping of self-burdened truth and recognition of one’s folly. This poem is more than a confession, it is an awakening of self and the importance to giving and not just taking, and the recognition that the next life has arrived – embrace it and fulfill her evermore with it. I enjoyed this poem immensely, I too much confess -

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Reshma Ramesh 27 October 2008

wow............what is greater than realizing that u have done wrong and ask for forgiveness....

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Seema Chowdhury 25 October 2008

its a wonderful poem. i hope your loved one will forgive you and you can start anew. Good Luck! ! !

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Asif Andalib 25 October 2008

Realization of true love of your spouse lately but it's not too late. A very nice poem wonderfully penned.

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Neha Aradhye 25 October 2008

seems like u really want to confess to dat someone! ! ! its really good! ! ! i must say ur poem is-a realization of hw hard(indirectly) , a person got a treatement from his/her loved ones

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Sarah Abdullah 25 October 2008

Nice one It's Always better to Thank those who stand by our sides Every Day Coz no one knows when will it be our last day

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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2008

as a woman all i ask is...doesn't the voice represent the whole of male fraternity?

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 October 2008

A confession of a heartbreaker.........hopin' for a new ray of lights! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008

in life we dream a lot...involve others also in our dreams...telling them that such dreams are theirs too... and in the end we find ourselves remain dreaming alone...a very good poem...meaningfully introspective 10

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Anjali Sinha 24 October 2008

'that you are the star of my sky who always carried my burdens' nice one inspite of her cooperation and love why do u fail to say 'lv you' ++10 regards anju,

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