A Confer With Life Comments

A great lesson taught/learnt! A nice write!

What a delightful little story - with a wise moral too, like a fairy tale. You have composed your poem with a good feel for structure and form. Just one point - the title? Do you mean a conversation with life, perhaps, or a conference with life? Confer is a verb. Hope you don't mind my correcting you - because the poem is well worth it! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

you earned a 10 with this great poem.

beautiful poem. You are the same age as I and I am amazed by your talent. Best of luck to you (10+++++++++++++) -stephanie

...'To dream, you sleep, I know But to achieve you dream, wake up my boy The outside sun awaits you'... beautiful philosophy in these lines, Sania...and great message too... you are talented well beyond your tender age...10

many should wake up as you said...cos most of us think, just dreaming is enough to achieve our goals........sebastine...........10 for sure....

very butiful...inscribed to the excellence of wrdz