Monday, June 15, 2009

A Condescending Rain In Summer! Comments

Rating: 3.8

Smiling flowers with fragrance enthralling,
Dashing waves of the sea to the shore,
And people walking to and fro on the beach,
I sit and muse over the life of each one!
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Ramesh T A
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Catrina Heart 22 June 2009

Musing over I stumbbled here and was amazed by your versitility in doing crafts of creative writing. Another marvelous composition, another food for the brain...you made me a smiling flower under the rays of sun...10+++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

Amazing poem. Amazing imageries,10+

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oh..that is beautiful..i watched indian movie..loved that beautiful multile vivid images..the end was so beautiful 10++++ All the show coming to a close at last in a hurry, All rushing to shelters available near hotel or sheds, And the rain condescending to intensify a little, I open my umbrella ready in hand to go home!

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rago rago 15 June 2009

a nice vivid picture of beach and the surroundings.........thank you for your kind sharing.

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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