Wednesday, April 25, 2012

A Concealed Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Concealed by a shadow
Behind the windows,
Overlooking the gateway
of no return,
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Romeo Della Valle
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Chuy Amante 18 April 2014

You speak you heart bro, that is a rare gift! Exquisite!

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Kasia Fedyk 16 May 2012

Romeo, this is sublime, I can close my eyes and feel the flow of emotions, silent and loud, both at the same time, it almost brings me into the state of time travel. Thank you so much! Love and Light! Divine Blessings. And Thank you! :)

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Harry Couchon Jr 14 May 2012

Romeo, loved that line overlooking the gateway of no return, . this poem gets a 10 in my book

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Saadat Tahir 07 May 2012

almost a mysterious and taut moment is painted in these lines. dramatic meaningful and the catharsis is on an unexpected level.. very well done indeed be happy sat

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Pheko Motaung 02 May 2012

Every line I heartily appreciate.Hold onto with all my soul.You are the man with the magic.For this brilliant piece of supreme achievement....thank you

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Gabriel Gauci Maistre 29 April 2012

Enjoyed the read! 10/10

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Sossi Khachadourian 29 April 2012

Nice poem my friend I liked it: -) best wishes and blessings!

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Captain Cur 27 April 2012

Powerful! Thoughts are always a cause for concern. Depends how they are directed, like yours in the best of directions.

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Captain Cur 27 April 2012

Powerful! Thoughts are always cause for concern. Depends how they are directed, like yours in the best of directions.

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