Monday, September 9, 2013

A Compromise Comments

Rating: 4.5

I looked towards the sun one fine day
and felt it shine on my face.
The heat of it penetrated deeply
but it soon fell out of place.
...
Read full text

Edwina Reizer
sun
COMMENTS
John Brown 10 December 2013

A magical poem Edwina. I enjoyed it very much.

0 0 Reply
Anil Kumar Panda 09 September 2013

beautiful poem.The flow, wordplay and rhyme is so nice.keep inking Edwina.

0 0 Reply
Edwina Reizer

Edwina Reizer

LAKEWOOD, NJ
Close
Error Success