Friday, May 24, 2013

A Composition Of Rare Feminine Art, Not Even Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not even a master sculptor
Could form lips soft as your velvet bows
Curved slightly upwards they unveil
Bright embers of your facial glow.
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Captain Cur
COMMENTS
Chuy Amante 20 April 2014

Cap'n I salute you! Lowly shipmate I am

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Patricia Grantham 10 July 2013

This is very nice Captain. I really enjoyed the beauty of this poem. The subject of your affection must have been captivating! Not only Jennifer blushed but I did too. Ha! Ha!

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Shahzia Batool 27 May 2013

I disagree with the point in the 2nd stanza after reading the complete poetic description, your tabs can work wonders, they do! ! !

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Kanav Justa 25 May 2013

i am sure, , jennifer is blushing again after she reads this lovely poem, , ,

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Unwritten Soul 25 May 2013

Such a lovely and lovely poetry, full of artistic words in expression delivery! ! always good and creative captain u are_Soul

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