Tuesday, January 22, 2013

A Compasssionate Heart Comments

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A heart compassionate and gracious
Is an oyster with a pearl so precious
And is never alone in loneliness
Will always be rich even with no wealth
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Yasmin Khan
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Ken E Hall 10 August 2013

Very true words indeed with a perfect last line, Dew-drops that brighten the faces in gloom...compassion the ticket to heaven...luvli poem...regards

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Heather Wilkins 02 August 2013

a compassionate heart is a loving heart. excellent write

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 April 2013

I eavesdropped in the raindrops pitter-patter and the whish-whoosh windy aura of the poetry.

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Saadat Tahir 22 January 2013

nice rhyme scheme, moves in a fluid manner. great message, fervent and in itself compassionate... written with a tender heart and all the feelings of empathy and sympathy... and that is precisely a very highly developed human trait. liked reading...thanx

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Hazel Durham 22 January 2013

So true, I firmly believe what goes around comes around, so to be pure in heart is like a sunbeam being your constant companion! !

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