A Commoner Comments
One more day gone, fast and quick
Living cost up a kite, not tick by tick.
Pocket so thin and list too thick,
Vultures all round, to hook and pocket prick.
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This is so very true! A very thought-provoking poem that brings out the plight of the common man in today's world.
the reality of so many written so smoothly....I loved your choice of words
'Harsh Realities of life is pictured as a painting'. I liked its rhythm and essence.
Life is increasingly becoming so for a commoner. Let us learn to live this life happily.
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7/19/2025 2:16:17 PM # 1.0.0
Truly said-A commoner has only a day normal.......i appreciate...great write Sir