A Committed Man In This Lagoon. Comments

Somewhere, I did find my own style of writing... : -)

Beautifully written! Why don't you write more of this stuff? Sorry I missed this poem earlier! !

Stupendous.Love to race and culture has added a different odor to it.

Deep thoughts well presented. Nice read.

It is amazing that you can be so very deep. I adore this poem and your writing. Keep believing, my friend.

A committed man in this lagoon-this title is really apt to it, the poem and the poet is unified in tone, sense of sorrow operates through the whole part giving beautiful image of race and nation.well crafted, keep writing--

wonderful poem, well penned with deep ideas.10

Wow..So nicely written...10 from Brishti

Very nice its as if I am taking this ride with you..........very good! ! ! :)

very goood imsgery.beautifull poem posted10 surya

ur words raced thru a very unconventional idea...

We are we are.......................!

a great thought...well done

We are not divine. Very true

yeah Kee. thats just how humans are. well crafted, really.

So very true Kee.... We are mere human beings....not at all divine. Anjana

God not gave me an angel....we are not divine......very nice.Kee Thampi.