A little say to you,
my darling-
You don't come and love me
I can't commit you
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Great poem of love, what's profound about it deals with commitment. Love can get you committed.
bravo.nicely penned. i think i commented this before for another poe.love must be bilatteral.if its not it will be changed to either hatred or not. but commitment for love is so admirable. welldone~nb
Nice poem, a lil bit seemingly with a touch of satire. Am back only now after travel n i enjoyd readin dis.
nicely written..heart touching...well done fellow poet...hats off
amazing....such a romantic piece you have created...........bravo sir, well done
HI.GOOD POET.I LOVED YOUR POEM VERY MUCH.YOU WRITE WELL.YOUR POETRY IS SO GOOD.THANKS.
Positive love poem and great commitment for your love. Love develops on such grounds of faith and trust.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Musfiq.