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The infantile word 'infantile'
brings up in me a bit of bile.
The other word (he called it boring)
reminds me of him never scoring
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Cool way to put someone out.....So calm and with class.
Poetry done the Nehrlich way Never bores when he has something to say. A 'Commentary' he makes to make a point, May leave some 'bent'... And some out of 'joint'! LSP
I enjoyed this. I think rhyme can be used in many different ways.......snappy come-backs or more serious poetry. Nicely done Herbert. Never change to satisfy the 'popular' opinion. sincerely, mary
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7/21/2025 7:33:02 PM # 1.0.0
How anyone could bore with your writing is a puzzle. Nicely done! KK