Friday, September 4, 2015

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My friend, I know you're a teacher,
for the students, a great preacher,
but when you come back at home,
don't you see yourself in Rome?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 22 September 2015

Two lovely poems from two writers whom I admire. I don't know why but I feel that I must write a poem about them in my own clumsy way.-10

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Valsa George 05 September 2015

Akhtarji..... How I should thank you for this publicity! I feel awed and embarrassed! Happy that you wrote a great poem for me and quoted my own poem! You are too mischievous I must say! A 10. (I am in a hurry.... going to attend a function. I will be back only tomorrow) I shall read the poem once again later, also some other poems of yours!

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Khalid Saifullah 04 September 2015

A wonderful comment, on a wonderful poem of a wonderful poetess...........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2015

Read and enjoyed. Challanged depictioon with excellent collocation.. Thanks for sharing. .....10

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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2015

Here is Valsa's comment on her poem. Just being poetic, Fr. Augustine! Thank you for reading the poem!

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