Wednesday, July 4, 2018

A Comment On Stephen (Steve)howard's Haiku 3 Comments

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I see your face there in the aurora of a dusk,
I know it's an illusion,
you do not come in the sunlight,
and then I hoped you in the moonlight,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2018

could my love change my killing fate, I shall not smile but the smiling flowers, will be a sign that night smiled on us! beautiful comment dear poet Akhtar... your comments are in itself very fine poems. i have always told you that...... thank u dear Akhtar. tony

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Khalid Saifullah 11 July 2018

What a lovely poem, the poem is itself a beauty.

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Red Soul 05 July 2018

A beautiful love poem Jawad sahab. Love is a beautiful feeling. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2018

You are getting better every day. It is inspiring

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