Saturday, February 6, 2016

A Comment On Edward Kofi Louis' Poem F.S.P. Comments

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From a Sweet Palace,
where Fairies Sing in Passion,
Free of charge is a Slow Poison,
that doesn't kill,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 02 May 2019

i think you meant " Creed" . " Crete, Greece's largest island, is known for its varied terrain, which ranges from fine-sand beaches at Elafonisi to the White Mountains. Mt. Ida, the tallest of the range, is home to the Ideon Cave, which was the birthplace of Zeus, according to Greek mythology. " and EKL typed " shearing" . ha ha. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 03 May 2019

Dear Teacher, thanks for correcting me once again.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 February 2016

Thank you! ! Great work done and, for your dedication. Thanks for shearing.

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Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

A wonderful tribute to a fellow poet

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 February 2016

F.S.P. becomes more and more meaningful,

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