Sunday, December 23, 2007

A Commander With Out Portfolio Comments

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A commander with out portfolio
Life goes on slowly & slowly.
Time passes away rapidly.
When I grew form a child to a father
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The commander without portfolio is a very strong image with which to begin a poem. It drew me in and I enjoyed reading your work.

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Everyone of us is a commander without portofolio, life is a mad stampede

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vijay gupta

vijay gupta

meerut, india
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