Saturday, January 24, 2009

A Comforting Heart For Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

We lie together in complete silence
Not speaking a word, just let our hearts beat
And listen to them tell one another how in love they are
I'll put my ear to your heart and listen to it beating
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Vincent Dali
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Mystic Angel 21 March 2009

this is beautiful..............

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Great tribute to LOVE...a ten.

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Inner Whispers 30 January 2009

hmn...right love, vincent. She got lucky! Nice...10

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Danielle Bennett 25 January 2009

from the 4 poems you've made. i surely like this one the best. yuor teacher was right, you're going to be a great poet

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Hope Wallin 25 January 2009

Aw... this poem is really sweet! It's so lovey, it's great. :)

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