Thursday, June 15, 2023

A Colourful Morning ~ Comments

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In the morning sky, colours burst with delight,
each one is vying for our gaze, isn't it an exquisite sight.

As the sun's golden rays illuminate the blushing pink clouds,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 16 June 2023

I pick these lines: As the sun's golden rays illuminate the blushing pink clouds, we stay mesmerized while the azure sky resonates with sound.

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Rajan T Renganathan 16 June 2023

Brilliant poem, A very good morning poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 16 June 2023

Great way to begin our day, morning sun, nature, birds, animals all are afresh and in good mood, we all commemorate the morning period with immense excitement. Splendid/ vibrant verse.

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M. Asim Nehal 15 June 2023

I had to repost it since something went wrong with this poem (some unexpected error was shown)

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