Sunday, August 9, 2015

A Colloquy Of Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

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In this dry land we
must believe in something Good
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Daniel Brick
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2022

Mother Earth pours forth riches for all her children.....lovely expression.

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Denis Mair 14 September 2018

The two positions are not totally at loggerheads, so they should be able to offer insights to each other. As a nature-lover, I am aware that natural laws are beautifully interwoven, thus providing a material substrate for life. No wonder I feel that the cosmos is marvelous and magical. Supposing that life is divinely created, can we not say that the mind of the Creator is a place where natural laws are elegantly interwoven so that life can unfold?

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Denis Mair 14 September 2018

Perhaps the two sides can move closer together this way: SPARKS OF DIVINITY ARE AT WORK IN NATURE'S MATERIAL SUBSTRATE...NATURAL LAWS MESH ELEGANTLY IN THE MIND OF THE CREATOR

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Bharati Nayak 18 November 2016

This concept of colloquy I loved so much.Thank you for sharing.

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Liza Sudina 18 November 2015

Who feeds: God-Father - Nature- Mother. Hope - Faith Blessing by God - fulfilling our needs by Fate.. You seem to avoid the word God. I often meet in men that they have difficulties with it, and they just can't pray to men, to fathers, etc. they better choose Mary for this. all the Monasteries for men are in the Name of God's Mother Mary. I have the similar difficulty - I better pray to men than women. Praying to women, although saint, disturbs me somehow...

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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Amazing conversation, Daniel! Filled with truth and ingenuity far beyond any debate, as two people travel together fulfilling their purposes in life, setting them free from the barriers and restrictions imposed on them through an argumentative debate! Love this poems willingness to listen and respond intuitively! Thank you so much for sharing this one! RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 09 August 2015

Amazing concept and perfect execution!

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Sandra Feldman 09 August 2015

Mother Earth indeed pours out her many benedictions. This, ]]Love Story[[ with the Earth, is full of great convictions. Beautifully written poem, in form and substance, great work!

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