Monday, May 29, 2006

~a Collision Of Souls~ Comments

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When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake
she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.

Right then and there she knew it, her world forever changed.
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Mary Nagy
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Leo Lopes 27 August 2006

Hey mary...1stly i want to thank you for your comment, that was very nice and too true, i liked this poem very much, i can picture the scenery just thru the words you've used... i'll read some more so keep writing okay... ciao

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Nalini Hebbar 16 July 2006

love at first sight...made for each other...real strange how it works...loved it...love...nalini

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A POEM OF MAJESTY, THAT TOUCHES ALL HUMAN SENSES...YOUR PASSINATE FORTE HAS AGAIN BORE PROOF THAT THERE IS SUCH A CREATION AS THE PERFECT LOVE POEM...YOU ROCK, YOUNG LADY, AND KEEP THAT PEN OF YOURS A'POPPIN& A'PUMPIN'! ...'''''''''''''FRANK

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Raynette Eitel 29 May 2006

This is a rhyming poem at its best, May. Sweet, controlled, and with truth ringing all the way through it. Raynette

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Dee Daffodil 29 May 2006

Beautiful Mary...very nice job! ! Hugs, Dee

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What a sweet love story! Todd is so lucky to have you.

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