When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake
she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.
Right then and there she knew it, her world forever changed.
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love at first sight...made for each other...real strange how it works...loved it...love...nalini
A POEM OF MAJESTY, THAT TOUCHES ALL HUMAN SENSES...YOUR PASSINATE FORTE HAS AGAIN BORE PROOF THAT THERE IS SUCH A CREATION AS THE PERFECT LOVE POEM...YOU ROCK, YOUNG LADY, AND KEEP THAT PEN OF YOURS A'POPPIN& A'PUMPIN'! ...'''''''''''''FRANK
This is a rhyming poem at its best, May. Sweet, controlled, and with truth ringing all the way through it. Raynette
What a sweet love story! Todd is so lucky to have you.
Hey mary...1stly i want to thank you for your comment, that was very nice and too true, i liked this poem very much, i can picture the scenery just thru the words you've used... i'll read some more so keep writing okay... ciao