A Collision Of Souls Comments

Fantastic poem about timid love becoming even more. Title is great too! RoseAnn

Fabulous, the emotion is just oozing out, I truly loved reading this poem. Thankyou for the experience.---Melvina---

Applaud! Applaud! Lady of the lake, sword pulled from stone freeing the passion.Beautiful Mary, Really.Love Duncan

Wonderful, I could feel the emotion you placed.Loved it! Regards Patricia

Wow your poem was amazing, it was awesome how you captured the emotions perfectly.

A beautiful poem, Mary. More people should focus on the positive like you do. Also, I read this poem from bottom to top and found it interesting to see the roots of such strong feelings at the end (or beginning!) brilliant structure, brilliant poem. respect, JB

Very beautiful and sweet to the mind.

Hi Mary: -) I like it, love is such a complex thing, and i think you express it well in this poem, you go into great detail, about the little things. Great! ! !

aww i like it! Lylyanna

hello mary, this is phillip. I love the title, the poem is great also, hidden truths. i thought she was going to die after the first paragraph, but it was alove poem.

Mary This stands to the love that does occur between man and woman and the romance that we all strive for. Well done Don S

Very nicely written. Great job.

another lovely poem Mary, well done V x

Great Poem you should be very proud Thank You for the experience F'nor

Mary-You have written a great poem here that kept me engrossed up to the last word. I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work. All my best-Faith Elizabeth Brigham

'When she first saw him walking like a God down to the lake she knew it was the last free breath that she would ever take.' ah... excellent begining and the poem is penned perfectly! Well done! HBH

This sounds like Starnberger See to me. How did you know? Very nice, Mary. Best H

Hi Mary, I do like this one. It's not Lake Huron is it by any chance, cos it looks as if it has a sort of beach. Sincerely Ernestine

Very good poem with a strong foundation built around romanticism.