A Collapsed House Rebuilt Comments
In that top corner of the house
A cobweb swaying in breeze
What made the breeze become the wind
A foul play..it blew butting blind
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There is a beautiful combination on breeze, wind and cobweb. Visited time and again. Five stars.
A wonderful poem imbued with insight and wisdom. Hardwork is a great attribute to gain success in life. A clever write with great imagery.
So brilliantly captured the work of cobweb. Wonderful imagery. Thi poem has a special attraction. Visited time and again.
A great poem dear madam! I derive enormous pleasure in reading this fabulous piece of poetry again and again. ToMyPoemList
A brilliant piece that pack a punch that can knock the heart into a leap.Thanks for sharing
A great iinspirational poem emphasizing the importance of hard work and consistency. Heartiest congrats on poem of the day.
Thank you Ratnakar....it's my pleasure having your comment on my poem
A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom, insight and spirituality. The harshness of life will not deter us to rise again and again like the spider on this marvelous write. A poem of courage, perseverance and hope. A great message to humanity. Congratulations, Indira for a well deserved accolade.
Thank you very much Rose...indeed a beautiful comment...God bless you
Verey interesting. In my childhood I used to watch spiders weaving cobwebs. Now I am happy that I have a friend too to watch the nature's boon. Congratulations being the poem POD
Thank you friend...I am glad you too like watching nature...nature has got manifold of things very interesting like the spider
A poignant rendition elegantly encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing, madam. Remain enriched.
A beautiful message of hope and perseverance in a few words! Congratulations!
Congratulations on your poem being chosen as Poem Of The Day1 It's a beautiful short poem with excellent power of observation!
Life always finds a way to express itself- even in unlikeliest of forms. Thanks & Congrats for this poem adjudged POD, Indira Ma'm.
Very true..Thank you very much Rajnish Manga for your good words
Why does a breeze become wind that sways the house of little spider ? Who knows? Perhaps a foul play.But it is God's mercy that makes life come to track. Congratulations esteemed poetess Indira Renganatham for your poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!
Thanks a lot Bharati...a high remark it is...I am overwhelmed..It is quite sometime now since we both interacted ...I shall read your poems....thanks again and God bless you
What made the breeze become the wind A foul play..it blew butting blind Chasing the wind now cobweb in a play It's His mercy the spider back on way Behold, he is weaving again his house - - - - - Such a beautiful poem with spiritual depth! (Part-1)
An excellent little poem on nature dear madam! Many congratulations for this beautiful work being chosen as Poem of the Day!
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It's wonderful Ma'am 😍