Tuesday, August 14, 2007

A Collapse Of Conscience Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a way to live:
(in this space between the stars)
all the falling happens
with opened arms.
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Michael Ardizzone
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Violet Llewellyn 22 August 2007

I really love this poem, it's very well written. I am especially fond of the first four lines, the imagery there is really beautiful. -Storm

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Joseph Daly 19 August 2007

Hell Michael, this is good stuff. The imagery is affective and the pace of the pm runs smoothly. will bereturning to this.

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Michael Ardizzone

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