Wednesday, August 9, 2017

A Collaborative Way Comments

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I've touched people as I meet them and shook their hands
Or tapping their shoulders in camaraderie
Some people like a quick hug or a buss
But the best touch is one of the heart
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Doris Cornago
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 September 2017

This is the best place Where we can Be carefree On the Same Level As Heart to heart is Not subjective Not looking at color Or creed, just a human Heart longing to harmonize Beautiful array encoded along with the beautifully penned poem. Thanks Doris for the sharing.10+++ for it. Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2017

Instead of different caste, creed and colour we must work together in collaborative way like music in band made by difgerent instruments but harmonizing well and amusing. Dear Doris, you have very nicely inscribed this here with example. Your penmanship creates an angle in composition that looks beautiful.Thanks.

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Doris Cornago 09 August 2017

Hi Kumarmani. I have devised this kind of poetry structure like a classic dance where the partners engage in spirited steps then slows down steps to rest so they can relax a bit before slowly gaining speed to separate in an upbeat, hearts racing. Similarly in reading a poem, one must be graceful and have time to pause for reflection, taking up the reading again and ends on a high note.

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Doris Cornago 09 August 2017

Thank you for your kind appreciation. :)

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Upendra Upm 09 August 2017

It is like digging and digging the hard surface of earth for precious metals of peace and love , with words,

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Doris Cornago 09 August 2017

Such a beautiful way of putting it. Thank you for the reflection on the poem. :)

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