Wednesday, October 8, 2014

A Cold White Light Comments

Rating: 2.0

he loved the
cold white light of the fog
flowing around his legs
wispy and ephemeral
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hap rochelle
fog
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Kay Staley 08 October 2014

nice drastical language and dramatic imagery. An enjoyable read...although it kinda seems like it should be a part of a bigger work of writing that would show the meaning of this piece and be used for a purpose.

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