Friday, September 9, 2016

A Cold July Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sang so many songs in front of an audience of flaws
I broke so many skulls without laying a finger on their bones
I didn't apologize for breaking apart our family ties
I lay awake I'm out of time
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Robert Burgan
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Chinedu Dike 03 March 2017

An insightful depiction of loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Robert.

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Carol Nichols 17 November 2016

This is amazing. Dark and brilliant. I also love the title.

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Robert Burgan 08 December 2016

Carol, thank you for all the very kind comments, I appreciate the feedback and will be posting more poems soon. Thank you again

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