Tuesday, February 16, 2016

A Cold Day And The Sun Comments

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And today the sun shone with a warm spring like glow
But no-one had told it, that the air was so cold
Even it's burning desire to burst forth
Could not push aside all the cold from the north
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Hans Vr 16 February 2016

A very poetic capture of the weather A pinch of frustration about a bright sun apparently forgetting to give us the warmth Well written poem

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