A Cold Conclusion Comments

THIS IS GREAT A COLD CONCLUSION IN DEED...A CONCLUSION WE WOULD RATHER BE IGNORANT OF THAN HAVE KNOWLEDGE OF...POIGNANT WRITE...[APPLAUSE]

A cold conclusion...accepting a fact that we would much rather deny...great composition

a poem open our heart with a love You arrive without an appetite and go to bed As another day begins the atmosphere is clouded

Amazing composition, enjoyed and added 10.

grief, betrayal, resignation- atmosphee created with nice visual images. please read my poem when love is dead

My word this is heavy but so accurately described. I particularly like the stark detail of cold dinner, leaving the domesticity in makes this all the more credible and could be any household. HG; -) xx

we still hope in the future. nice piece.............

the inspiration... it is only you

certainly this isn't the conclusion yet.

Another ten. I could say something about love, but this thought just struck me. So many things have been said about love and we deal with it continuously in all kinds of ways, I wonder if we really know what it is.

I like your tie in with the cold dinner, and your title. Another vivid image is your 'aching blue heart tattoo'. Love can go severeal directions. Not all of them are happily ever after. I've tried to deal with this in 'Lovers Leap' and 'Recrudesce.' As my Momma used to say, 'When they start to stray, it's time to nueter or spay.' She was sharing more than advice on my dogs. Tom