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Theme is excellent. Lines separated from the stanzas add deeper significance.
Generosity is not giving in what has in excess but in giving what has minimum Lord Buddha [LB] once asked to bring best offering to all …many brought many riches and so on…but one disciple brought a ragged loin cloth …LB jumped said it the best offering …asked where he got it…he said that …one old lady said please wait there I’m going to bushy area to give my only thing that I’ve…excellent poem…..B-2 … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I cannot find a suitable word for the comment on this spectacular poem. You really know how to express the feelings....
Hi, George you do a good job, some of your poems are nice to read, full of wisdom!
She gave her all! Our all is what God requires from us to honour us.
The young man that told Jesus how he had observed all the commandments and ak how to get to heaven, Jesus replied to give all his possessions to the poor and the young man was very sad because he had accumulated a lot of wealth, is similiar to this but in reverse, George you always seem to open my eyes, thank you for this wonderful poem.
We have nothing to beg from God but have to offer to Him only the only wealth we have- our body and soul- the way Jesus has taught us by offering His soul first and sacrificing His body next on Cross for the benevolence of mankind A good meaningful poem with a truthful message therein...10
Touchy analysis of a bit historical truth blended with a soft and sensitive observation from religious parable, you have established the real hunger of humanity. Good poem for the readers of all ages. Very matured your skill for depicting the belief. Perhaps you have acquired the efficiency to be a poet of the mass. Thank you. Regards, 10++ pranab
Sincerity and without condition act will bring human to the higher level, before god and noble human. I really respect the poem perpective and it's carry a very solid weight for reader to be more compassion. Well done.
Small coin of little worth....priceless. From out of her heart she gave, this is where the greatest treasure lies. From the little seed she gave, a greater harvest she would receive, An inspired poem, : D
This poem made me think of something. I would be happy to think that those who give and those who beg are the two facets if the same coin. She begged for God?
This poem enlighten a pious heart delivering a true love to his/her beloved god. God or Buddha are actually the icons, they sat there are to raise our reflecltion, reflection is a genune truth that endows people to do it everyday, God knows who is the sincereist, and matter not how much you donate or render, nothing is better than a true heart, the original heart is everything, this is the base that makes the world peaceful and harmony, thank you for sharing for the good poem, love to read many of your poetry, brought the enlightenment and well-beings. Also hope you can read one or two of mine.. I came from Taiwan, great to know you.