Sunday, July 3, 2011

A Code Of Silence Broken Comments

Rating: 4.5

When my spoken words
Tenderly caress her ears
No holding back..no fears
I the poet take my pen
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Romeo Della Valle
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2013

Only written words remain a love message spread around the world. Very romantic and beautiful, your description of love. Sadness touching your heart from love's disappointment brings tears. Love this poem, keep writing you're an expressive poet for sure. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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I love how beautifully the words are woven together. Really passionate piece.

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Kaila George 15 November 2011

OMG...that was BRILLANT...wow...lost for words....beautiful...bravo..bravo

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Anshul Gupta 31 August 2011

I have always believed that with written words one never dies. It is one of the ways like painting, music etc. by which we can live forever and I suppose that is what is called immortality. Written words make one immortal. Here the poet has described the immortal love very beautifully and has written from his soul. Very deep and true. I loved the poem.

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Raeanne Furfaro 17 August 2011

What a lovely homage to a woman obviously well loved. The thoughts in this one are remarkable in their simplicity and adoration. Well done Romeo. I love it

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 August 2011

A love-message spread around the world, Traveling through sunshine, snow and rain, Describing times well spent And the secret of her scent... Nicely written and winner choice of words.

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Raeanne Furfaro 12 August 2011

Very nice imagery. I can feel the love in the heart as it has her close and the crushing disappointment when the heart loses it's most valuable possession. This one took me on a journey through love and heartache. Well written. Brava!

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Gary Manning 11 August 2011

I have to lay a 9.9 on this one for the fact it puts ya in the mind of a romantic moment. Check my love poem out called my sweet.. Agen this some good shet

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Luz Hanaii 31 July 2011

I like your style, deep and smooth at the same time.

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Samia Mehraj 16 July 2011

kudos to the poet.............................

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Narijan IdealCave 15 July 2011

nice poem..........great words and expression

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James Mclain 10 July 2011

From a single thought come others. From so few the many concepts, wander there from us to you. Then that one it grew to love, When such written language, came again to you...iip

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Abdallah Gamal 09 July 2011

Wooooow a well crafted poem.. Congratulations u're a great poet.. keep on writing Sir u're talented :)

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Diwakar Bhatt 09 July 2011

U have gone into the realm of poetry....the language of an intellectual...abstract thinking...

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Shadow Girl 08 July 2011

wow what a passionate and intense poem - delightful! SG

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Antonio Liao 05 July 2011

Loveliest poem I every read, it touches the intense passion of thought of a poet and the pen....wonderful...God bless, a star and 10 +++

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Hans Vr 03 July 2011

Very nicely written, full of feeling, touching the reader in a very special way.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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